Well done Tolu you have shown you have clearly thought about the design of your album cover and how you aim to create an identity for your band. You must take care of your grammar and vocabulary
for example you refer to using natural lighting as a second option which is fine, however don't say 'Show a professional look.'
Try 'This too will create the professional outcome which I desire.' please read over your work before you post it as poor grammar and spelling will result in you being marked down.
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ReplyDeleteWell done Tolu you have shown you have clearly thought about the design of your album cover and how you aim to create an identity for your band.
ReplyDeleteYou must take care of your grammar and vocabulary
for example you refer to using natural lighting as a second option which is fine, however don't say 'Show a professional look.'
Try 'This too will create the professional outcome which I desire.' please read over your work before you post it as poor grammar and spelling will result in you being marked down.
As stated before Tolu, You demonstarte your ideas proficently however you must proof read your work.
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